feedback on a short

[seansshack]

Looking for feedback on a 13 page short script. Black comedy.

Will return the read/review/feedback, as just need to know if this short works. In for "potential" funding, so any feedback is welcome.


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[preston]

hey sean, i'd like to read it. i'll do my best to give relevant feedback.

 

[seansshack]

Thanks a million - just sent you a PM

 

[preston]

hey sean... good script, i read it last night. i will read it again and send you my notes through PM or email.

funny stuff!

 

[seansshack]

Thanks man. Much appreciated.

 

[preston]

i sent you some notes, but you probably already know that by now! :laugh:

 

[seansshack]

Just going through it now. Thanks a million. I owe you one (especially for picking up mistakes LOL!).

 

[preston]

hey no problem; i hope i was able to help. good luck!