Feedback for teaser please.

[Jim Brennan]

Cut this teaser for a feature I am editing. Looking for feedback

The music is just soundtrack loops at the moment. We are still looking for a composer.

The file is 11MB, so it might take a little time to load.

Thanks.

LINK

 

[John Morrison]

Good morning Jim.

Good: Good shots. The tempo of the music and action during the last 30 seconds or so made me pay attention. Some good acting, lighting and composition there.

Not so good: I felt there were too many fades in the front. I think the first 10 or so shots were too dark and too short, which combined with the fades, I wasn't sure at first if these scenes were supposed to be almost visible scenes or not. The slow music and low-volume music bed up front made the pace very slow and hard to follow (I understand you're getting a composer, but am basing this off of what I'd seen/heard).

 

[Jim Brennan]

Thanks. Made some changes.