Demo Reel Critque

[epsilonbass]

Hey guys this wasn't really any cam specific, so I'm posting it here. Hopefully I can get some critques from you guys. The pacing is a bit slower than a lot of demos I've seen, but it's more my own style, I like to have longer takes.

The cams used are:
DVX
PD-150
DVC-30
XH-A1
16mm Bolex
16mm Arri BL

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbjYArWkLBshttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbjYArWkLBs\

PS. I'm walking for graduation from Uarts in philly today, so if anyone wants to hire me, let me know.

 

[Drew Ott]

I think you should take out the zoom across the street through the traffic. It's shaky and it's... a zoom.

I liked it other than that. Maybe you could show an entire scene's shot progression. Just 2 seconds from each shot to get an idea of how you cut a scene.

Also I'd put the information page on the beginning. I couldn't tell that it was a DP reel until the end.

 

[deedive]

agree about the info page being in the front.
also I think Dp's should not show people there reel on Youtube, it really degrades your work.