Hey guys, I'd like to share my newest short film, "Curtain Call," which has been in post for the past month. Shot as usual on the A1 and Letus Extreme.
Charming little short. One thing I would have done differently: allow for the feeling of time passing after David leaves her to take his place in the audience. The time jumped to the end of the show too fast. It could have held on that moment, perhaps his walking away, around the theater, etc. Just a little longer.
the color correction around 1:33 is darker, the oranges are more vibrant then when he's standing especially when you do the dirty shot looking over to the girl he's way darker then the entire scene before these shot.