Crtique my video!

[Kyle Kearns]

Here's something I'm working on for a client, it's not finished yet. The client wrote it and I had to do my best to try and interpret what they wanted. There's two versions, the first is with a song I picked and the second is the one they suggested. It's supposed to be a promotional video for an upcoming photography contest. The shot with the building at the end they wanted to have the event info text over the building, but there's nothing on it for now.

The password is: lens1817


https://vimeo.com/106225269

 

[Shooter]

The client wrote it and I had to do my best to try and interpret what they wanted.

Thats usually the deal. Do you think you succeeded? does the client think you have?

It's supposed to be a promotional video for an upcoming photography contest.

If its ever going to work...the viewer should know this without being told!

 

[Kyle Kearns]

Very good points!

They just emailed me and were pretty happy with the result...I feel like it could have been a lot better. I think it's a little unclear what the video is about.

 

[legrevedotcom]

Thats usually the deal. Do you think you succeeded? does the client think you have?




If its ever going to work...the viewer should know this without being told![/COLOR]

I was thinking that too... if you hadn't told me and there were no titles on the video page, it could have been a trailer for some photo studio, or a weird short of some kind. Are they adding titles and so on themselves?