critique my short, Kumquat

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wbfish

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Just found out that my first short, Kumquat, made it into the Portland International Short Shorts Fest. Check it out at Zonker Films or www.oneaspen.com I would really like to hear feedback, thanks.
 
Jesus Pookie. That avatar threw me off. Thought it was Hudson responding. :shocked:

Edit: Watched the short. Enjoyed it. I thought your edit needed tightening, but I liked your compositions and shot choices. You had one pet peeve of mine. You gave yourself multiple credits instead of condensing the work you did into one credit line. Other than that, good stuff man.
 
yeah I think pookie is stealing everyone's avatar now. just don't use Trent's or else you'll have all the single men half the married men in here being all nice to you and pm'ing your every chance they get. :) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
 
Pookie! LOL wtf? that's bugged out.

Just now got through the short. It was good. the edits needed some more work but overall it was good.
 
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