Hey,
Anyone feel like reading a screenplay? It's for a 5 minute short film.
It's got a sci-fi / indi feel to it. I don't want to spoil the theme because I'd like to know if I portrayed the message well enough in the script.
Please post here and I will pm you a link to where you can download the .pdf
Please feel free to suggest any changes to the dialogue and ''mind talk'' because I feel like right now the ending is sort of ''feeding'' words to the viewer too directly. For example: ''Today I am going to the park by myself because I feel sad.''
Anyone feel like reading a screenplay? It's for a 5 minute short film.
It's got a sci-fi / indi feel to it. I don't want to spoil the theme because I'd like to know if I portrayed the message well enough in the script.
Please post here and I will pm you a link to where you can download the .pdf
Please feel free to suggest any changes to the dialogue and ''mind talk'' because I feel like right now the ending is sort of ''feeding'' words to the viewer too directly. For example: ''Today I am going to the park by myself because I feel sad.''
