Criticism requested on web series shot on Nikon D90

keeganuhl

Member
As I have great respect for the creative talent and artistic vision expressed by the membership and readership of this site, it would be an honor to be criticized and lambasted in public.

Seriously, I would love to hear any and all comments you have about every aspect of our show--from writing to editing to talent to sound and picture. We are a small group of people pouring our free time into this, and we are on a zero budget.

We shoot on Nikon D90 and light with two china balls, 2 c-stands and whatever bulbs I can squeeze into the practicals. Everyone on the crew volunteers their time, and the group works together to write and produce.

So, check it out and let's hear your flaming criticisms! :)

www.guessagain.net

blurb:

"3 roommates, 2 bedrooms, 1 apartment, ZERO life.

GUESS AGAIN is a comedy web series that follows 3 roommates with ZERO life. Rex is a tad quicker than Rainman, Jeremy tries to manage his anger with vitamins and holistic healing and Dean is a struggling actor whose only talents are finding drama in everyday life and mixing drinks. In their mid-20s, the roommates are stuck idling in the driveway of life. Episodes are 4-8 minutes in length and are rated MA for strong language."

Thanks for your time, and keep fighting the good fight!

Keegan
www.mkeeganuhl.com
 
I'm not one of the creative talents or artistic visionaries on this board, but I would like to say I enjoyed the episode "La".

The only major criticism I have is focus issues (ex. 2:58, 4:11) Sound is good, lighting is good.
I'd also recommend a nice graphic treatment for your intro rather than just the black screen/simple font.

Off topic: You know, that guy died who wrote the Green Acres theme. Dammit, I wish sitcoms still had songs with lyrics in their openings.
 
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