could use some feedback - thanks

[New_Zealand]

I'm filming 'My Carol Anne' this weekend. Trying to wrap up a film that I started last year.

In case you would like to check out a clip from the film and give me some feed back here it is:

http://homepage.mac.com/ilveu/iMovieTheater40.html

The film is shot in New Zealand.

Thanks,

 

[Mino]

Looks good so far. I am only concerned with the look on the face of the dead girl, it looks as though she died in her sleep, which maybe she did. I guess she looks too relaxed or something, I would expect to see more trauma in her facial expresion. Other than that , it looks really promising and I'm liking the choice of music for the trailer, hope there's more like it in the fianal cut.

 

[New_Zealand]

Thanks. Unfortunately being on the mac website (4 MB) you can't see a good shot of her face. It looks as if she has her eyes closed but in the real clip (6GB) the color on her face is pale and her eyes are have open which seems to have a blank look in them. There are rope marks around her throat showing that she has been strangled.