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odetotud

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After all of your responses I swallowed the cold hard truth I didn't want to admit and axed that idea, but did keep the serial killer I created which was my original motivation anyway.

So how's this,

A fledgling serial killer struggles to perfect his methodology and keep his secrets hidden after his fiance's father, who is an ex-homicide decective, becomes suspicious of him after a series of attacks and murders.

odetotud

It did read this:

A fledgling serial killer struggles to keep his secrets hidden after meeting his fiance's father, an ex-homicide detective.
 
What you have there sounds good, but if you have already discussed this topic in another thread you made, then post this there and have the mods delete this. There is no reason for frivilous/repeated threads, they just litter the board up. I am too lazy to figure out if this is a repost, but if it is, I trust you will make the fix.

:beer: Cheers,
 
When I first read this, I thought "Damn, I think someone stole an idea from over at Done Deal". Then I realized this is the same person. lol

Good luck ode.

EJ
 
How about:
"A retired homicide detective must protect his daughter from her boyfriend, whom he suspects to be a serial killer."

You don't have to promote serial killing with your story. You have a choice.
 
Hey here is another try, let me know what you think

After being accused of murder, a cop struggles to clear his name, flee the authorities, and find the real killer who looks identical to him.

odetotud
 
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