attrition4u
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Just finished a new short. I sure would be appreciative if anyone could find the time to give it a read and provide a little feedback.
It is relatively short (4 pages) because it was written to mirror a specific song. Sufjan Stevens, "Sister". The song is largely instrumental with a heavy, emotional guitar crescendo. It climaxes, and switches to acoustic at the very end of the song. A few lyrics and we're done.
The climax of this short was timed (for that matter, the length of the script) to coincide with the climax of the Sufjan song. If you've not heard it, I highly recommend you get your hands on a copy. Outstanding song!
Anyway, thanks in advance for anyone who might have the time. Cheers...
Forrester
It is relatively short (4 pages) because it was written to mirror a specific song. Sufjan Stevens, "Sister". The song is largely instrumental with a heavy, emotional guitar crescendo. It climaxes, and switches to acoustic at the very end of the song. A few lyrics and we're done.
The climax of this short was timed (for that matter, the length of the script) to coincide with the climax of the Sufjan song. If you've not heard it, I highly recommend you get your hands on a copy. Outstanding song!
Anyway, thanks in advance for anyone who might have the time. Cheers...
Forrester
