Domino Harvey
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Looking for some feedback.
Travelling to America next year for a good few months to shoot this series. Right now Its still In the scripts area. Myself and a volunteer writter from South Africa are working on It. And, as you might have guessed, Its called CRISIS.
(Idea Is In the middle of being copyrighted for the record)
The series Is set around the CDPA -- the Crisis and Disaster Prevention Agency -- and we follow there several missions throughout the weeks the show goes on. Sudden Disasters range from Bank Robbery to A Plane Going Down In LA to a Hurricane In The UK. Anything thats a disaster or can risk human life. Must be prevented.
On my side. I can admit some things have to do with terrorism. And come close to past and maybe future events. Except the fact you have to get past the terrorism point at one stage. And on the other you have to always be sensitive to people whove been affected by terrorism. So basically we're screwed In some matters.
XANDER HIGGINS
Who was fired from the CIA for reckless behavior in the field; an ex-NYFD fire marshal,
HARRY JUNGE
discharged due to an unstable mental state, who is now the Lead Field and Operations Agent.
ELLIE KEAMS
A professional computer hacker who has been pardoned by the President himself for the various computer laws she's broken, who now ranks as the Senior Tech Specialist for the agency.
LOGAN FISHER
A former Marine and LAPD cop with the tuff attitude, taking no for an answer and always having her wits and Intelligence about her shes Secondary Lead Agent of Operations
FELICITY TULLIER
A skilled FBI and NYPD criminologist and former CIA agent.
PETER GALLACHER
A former IRA guerilla who left the army to join Interpol, but who was transferred to the FBI for his skills.
Theres some light shread on some of the main characters backgrounds.
The series Is a 15 part and so far over the last 2 weeks all we have got Is 48 pages and still being rewritten. So It would be nice, I was thinking, If there were some honest trustworthy people who would read the teaser and first episode we have and let us know what they think. It could really put us on the right tracks. Of course theres a lot more I could say. But at the same time the Idea Isnt completely copyrighted so I dont want to be posting our sweat and pain on the Internet to be taken away.
If anyone wants to read the teaser, maybe the first episode. Please reply or drop my a PM. I'd appreciate any feedback.
Thanks
Travelling to America next year for a good few months to shoot this series. Right now Its still In the scripts area. Myself and a volunteer writter from South Africa are working on It. And, as you might have guessed, Its called CRISIS.
(Idea Is In the middle of being copyrighted for the record)
The series Is set around the CDPA -- the Crisis and Disaster Prevention Agency -- and we follow there several missions throughout the weeks the show goes on. Sudden Disasters range from Bank Robbery to A Plane Going Down In LA to a Hurricane In The UK. Anything thats a disaster or can risk human life. Must be prevented.
On my side. I can admit some things have to do with terrorism. And come close to past and maybe future events. Except the fact you have to get past the terrorism point at one stage. And on the other you have to always be sensitive to people whove been affected by terrorism. So basically we're screwed In some matters.
XANDER HIGGINS
Who was fired from the CIA for reckless behavior in the field; an ex-NYFD fire marshal,
HARRY JUNGE
discharged due to an unstable mental state, who is now the Lead Field and Operations Agent.
ELLIE KEAMS
A professional computer hacker who has been pardoned by the President himself for the various computer laws she's broken, who now ranks as the Senior Tech Specialist for the agency.
LOGAN FISHER
A former Marine and LAPD cop with the tuff attitude, taking no for an answer and always having her wits and Intelligence about her shes Secondary Lead Agent of Operations
FELICITY TULLIER
A skilled FBI and NYPD criminologist and former CIA agent.
PETER GALLACHER
A former IRA guerilla who left the army to join Interpol, but who was transferred to the FBI for his skills.
Theres some light shread on some of the main characters backgrounds.
The series Is a 15 part and so far over the last 2 weeks all we have got Is 48 pages and still being rewritten. So It would be nice, I was thinking, If there were some honest trustworthy people who would read the teaser and first episode we have and let us know what they think. It could really put us on the right tracks. Of course theres a lot more I could say. But at the same time the Idea Isnt completely copyrighted so I dont want to be posting our sweat and pain on the Internet to be taken away.
If anyone wants to read the teaser, maybe the first episode. Please reply or drop my a PM. I'd appreciate any feedback.
Thanks