I like it. But a few suggestions to sell the shot a bit more.
1) The far mountains and moon should move in with the camera move as well, since the camera is getting closer to those elements not the elements moving closer to the camera.
2) I would have a lot more dark shadows on the front of the Building and bright towards the edges where the moon would reflect off the building. The front should not be flat and bright because a lot of the moon is covered by the building.
3) I would darken up some of the trees and add a little haze as we go a little further away from the camera to add depth.
Just a few thoughts, hope this helps. It's a great start keep it up.
