It looks ok but its hard to judge ,try to record yourself and place your camera to take more filmic angles or frames ,its hard to judge footage of cups/flowers/plants,/cars/bikes etc -they dont move ,take some more interesting shots then you will get more feedback.Try to stop down lens to 2.8 or less if you can.
Its better,especially wide lens,but still you need to tone down exposure ,her white shirt is burned out ,we shoud be able to see nice folds on it ,dont use auto exposure,set to manual exposure and tone down 3 steps at least.
Canon HV cams have manual exposure ,just read manual/instruction.Or record in spotlight mode.
Your footage is little bit soft on corners but its not so visible if you have subjects in centre and not many detailed things on sides.
Your new tests have nice crisp n' clear wide shots. I noticed a little vignetting at some shots. Was this because of the wide lens? Have you done tests on the bigger cams?
we testing the bigger cams we can Borrowed,the test clips show later.the bigger cams need close-up or Achromat to full Screen with 36*24mm Picture.we can make the ccreen Brightness is even.