Eric Boellner
Well-known member
Would love to get a bit of feedback on this script. I wrote it last week, then rewrote it today and I'm going to the LA film office tomorrow to see what I need permit-wise in order to (hopefully) shoot this thing by the end of August. In the meantime, I'm looking for honest feedback from good writers on where this script is lacking and how I might be able to improve it within the confines of a no-budget shoot (as in, I'm not shooting in eight different locations with thirty actors so that suggestion might not be helpful! <grin>).
Thanks very much! BTW, if you have critique or suggestions, you can share them publicly right here in this thread, or privately via email (TravenFilm (at) gmail (dot) com) or PM on this board if you prefer. In any case, thanks again!
Michael
http://www.scribd.com/fullscreen/61822511?access_key=key-50i1evgsgnxiru4scz
Thanks very much! BTW, if you have critique or suggestions, you can share them publicly right here in this thread, or privately via email (TravenFilm (at) gmail (dot) com) or PM on this board if you prefer. In any case, thanks again!
Michael
http://www.scribd.com/fullscreen/61822511?access_key=key-50i1evgsgnxiru4scz