2 Intros (critique please)

boke

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I'm still a beginner so what I've been doing is trying to copy some of the intros I often see. So the first one is from a CNN video

My version ( http://www.vimeo.com/5927894 )

Original CNN version ( http://www.vimeo.com/5779555 )

I'd like any comments on how to make it better or closer to the original. The picture in the end is something I just stuck in, I'm not going to set up a green screen just for 1 pic. I feel like I need more (faint) color in the background like the original did with the travel flyers. Also the overall colors are not working for me and last would be the end, its just not matching up.


This is another.This is from Kramer's tutorials

( http://www.vimeo.com/5927921 )
 
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