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    Short Film Suspense thriller/4 pages REVISED PLEASE CRITIQUE STORY/NEED FEEDBACK!!

    ‘NUMB’ BY HAMOODY JAAFAR All Rights Reserved 2011 EXT. RESIDENTIAL STREET. EVENING Jack, a young man in his mid 20’s, is driving down a typical Michigan suburban street in a silver toyota camry. He is searching for something. He passes 5 houses and finally finds the house that he is looking...
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    4 Pg Short Film screenplay 'Numb' Suspense/Thriller FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!!

    ‘NUMB’ BY HAMOODY JAAFAR ALL RIGHTS RESERVED 2011. EXT. STREET. EVENING We see a man driving down a street as he pulls up to a house in his vehicle. He is on a mission as if he is searching for something. He begins to slow down and comes to a stop in front of a driveway as he examines...
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    Short Film- The Hanging (Horror)Need feedback!

    Jack is stranded in the middle of rural Ohio. With no spare tire or cell phone reception, Jack makes his way by foot to the nearest town. After a long journey he comes across a Farmhouse where he hopes he can find some help. Attached is the 15 page screenplay. It is a horror that will take...
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