BE RIGHT THERE, student film shot on D90

[vanlam]

My friend Jason & I recently shot another short film with the D90. It's only four minutes long, so please tell us what you think (Links on the right):

http://twocutfilms.com/films/be-right-there/

It's about a man who accidentally locks his keys in his car and imagines ways of retrieving them.

 

[ultrab]

I like the cinematography but for the history it could be better, i think.

 

[vanlam]

I like the cinematography but for the history it could be better, i think.

For the length you mean? Yeah, I agree it's probably too long

 

[artforme]

It's good that you realized that though. I think it's a cool film, but a bit too long for what it is.

There could have been a quicker, more too the point way to get locked out of the car. Too much just 'walking' in the beginning.

But I appreciate the old school feel to the film, silent era style, but with modern effects. Nice work.

 

[vanlam]

It's good that you realized that though. I think it's a cool film, but a bit too long for what it is.

There could have been a quicker, more too the point way to get locked out of the car. Too much just 'walking' in the beginning.

But I appreciate the old school feel to the film, silent era style, but with modern effects. Nice work.

Thanks for the feedback. I'm currently re-editing the film to be shorter actually.

 

[Coco Bermudez]

I like some of the compositions