SWEET MELINDA - 4 Guys. 1 Girl. Always Trouble.

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bashnaran

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Hey guys! Bash here and it's taken me quite the time to get back here! Good to be here though and I guess this means that I'm going to try to be more active on these forums!

SO anyway, to my main point! The night before Thanksgiving me and my friends were thinking of a project we once were shooting, but never completed. We wondered what happened and we kept wondering, wondering, and wondering. Finally, we got tired of wondering and we brought out the ol' Panasonic DVX100b and we started shooting and within 2 hours we were done. Of course that means that the cinematography and acting is kinda shabby, but it's not too bad, if I should say so myself! Haha.

Anyway- enough of me talking: Please take a look at "Sweet Melinda!"

THE FILM: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6lJkBSvCbd4

THE BLOOPERS & OUTTAKES: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1VI8WZzKHNg

Please take a look and give us your commentary!

Much love,
Bash

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"Sweet Melinda"

Directed by Bhaskar D. Naran (Bash Naran)
Starring: Michael McGinn, Bobby Andrews, Steven Marchetti, Jaclyn Montana, Isaac Peterson, and Marc Weinstein
 
nice premise for a story. definately could work on it and actually make it into sumthing much better. pretty dark with the available lighting and acting sketchy, but as u said it was pretty spur of the moment so watever. I'd say work one shot composition...because spur of the moment or not or big budget or nada...shot composition will greatly help. Alot of headroom sometimes...u crossed the line and totally threw me. One minute they looking one way..and the next they looking over the otherside. things to work on.

i say rewrite this and do it good. nice plot for a comedy. ( i'd ex out the killing of the friend :) )


edit: bloopers cracked me up :D
 
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