Some grabs for my short movie - "Shoot"

[mrblusky]

Some grabs for my short movie! Title: "Shoot"
CC with Adobe Premiere Pro.

 

[Vader]

i like the color correction, the girl shot seems a tad underexposed, but overall looks neat!

 

[UncleBenji1977]

The girl does look underexposed...But you could have been going for a day for night effect...

 

[mrblusky]

Thanx, but it's not a night effect....the light is turn off...

But thanx!

 

[Fliques Osman]

Nice grabs. Looks very interesting. Footage?

 

[dvxwheelr]

I like your angles and the way you compose your shots. Of course it helps to have interesting settings.

 

[Brett]

looks great, your actor reminds me of josh hartnett

 

[Motherboard]

the grabs look tight

 

[mrblusky]

This is my first short film. There are so many mistakes, I know. But when I directed it i was still inexperienced! Now I have learned a lot, so ... be good to me!

http://www.vimeo.com/7862346
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[ryvac]

so what are the mistakes
that was a great short. I watched all of it without ever getting bored.

 

[mrblusky]

Thanx ryvac!
I think i had some mistakes with whte balance, settings or something or with the sound ( i didn't have a good mic).

Anyway....thank you, i'm pretty satisfied to be my first short

 

[ryvac]

nice to hear that you are satisfied with your first short film.
trust me you will only get better so make more

if you want to get a good mic I'd recomend the Rode NTG-2.
maybe look into that next time!