Piece of Sh*t Races: 89 Mustang vs. 89 Charade

could have been written a little funnier, but overall it's a good idea. and please keep making more. just script it a little funnier.
 
Could you expand on your comment a little, xyouthx? Do you think the writing was too over-the-top or too reserved?
 
well it wasn't too over the top, it just wasn't very clever. The concept is good enough to make for some really funny dialogue but when the actors begin add-libbing and almost laughing, it makes me not laugh so much.
 
I think he means the idea is funny but it could have been executed better. I agree. Also, get rid of those cheesy peace of **** cannopus or pinnacle transition effects. other than that not bad, just up it a few notches.
 
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