Curran Sneakers - Commercial - DVX/SGpro

Pettersen

Pettersen

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Hey guys! I shot this commercial as a school assignment a couple of months ago, and I was hoping you would like to give me some criticism. I know the idea is a super cliche, but my SGpro had just arrived and I was dying to shoot something.

DVX100AE (PAL) + SGpro Rev.3 + Nikkor 50mm f1.8 + Nikkor 105mm f2.5 + Nikkor 20-35mm f2.8

http://pettersen-prod.com/Curran_reklame_web.mov


Hope you like it!

(btw I have some BTS shots I can upload if any of you are interested)
 
i liked it man. you made this in a very cool style, really like the look.
if i were to critique anything, i would say some gravel noise as she steps off. to me it just sounds cool when you hear the footsteps and it gives great contrast to the kind of silence (except for the breathing) that came before it
but otherwise, i really like
 
Thank you for the feedback! About the gravel noise, now that you say it, I really agree. I didn't think of that earlier.
 
If you do something like this again, you might be able to get a little more energy out of her movement by shooting at a faster shutter speed. Nice constancy in cam movement.
 
I already shot at 1/125 and I was afraid that a higher shutter speed would capture the grain of the spinning disc in the 35mm adapter.
 
Looks good, cuts need to be a little faster. Mix up your dolly shots, looks like you didn't mark them. Maybe even add some breathing, and a few CUs of her foot or of some sweat trickling down. :)

Nice job !!

The best f*cking sneakers you'll ever have !! lol ha
 
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