Looks bleak, is that what you're going for? The contrast seems a bit harsh, quite video-like. It can be a better look oftentimes to shoot lower contrast and increase contarst with a curve in post. It will still be high-contrast, but keep more detail, and not look as harsh.
Thanks for the comments yeah I was kind of going for a bleak test but by no means this is final just trying out a whole lot of different looks for a up and coming short. Still many tests to come many.
This is more what I'm going for although still testing different grades. I'm going to be integrating a cg character so I'm just doing a lot of testing.