An Uncluttered World - New Letus Ultimate Footage

The pacing of your intro was slightly off. The image after each credit should have remained on screen for a second to a second and a half longer.

I wouldn't use this narrator for any future projects. His voice was well recorded, but it lacks both presence and sentiment.

One thing that I learned when I was trying to be all serious and profound when writing my grandmother's eulogy - keep your narration simple, heartfelt and without pretense. Unassuming honesty works! TRYING to be fancy and profound doesn't.

Liked the music. Liked the images.

Keep it up!
 
definitely liked it. although i agree with bmowell about using him for another project, i think his voice suited this perfectly. you can almost imagine what the man looks like by the character his voice portrays and i think that with the fact that you never see this narrator creates a good dynamic.
i enjoyed it definitely
 
great video. good music. I agree with bmowell's comments on all counts. i think the few frames of black before the texts come out are the ones slightly off on pacing. The narrator's tone quality might not be suitable for this, it "curls" a bit. But overall this is good work.
 
I occasionally try to narrate some of my projects.

Sometimes it works.

Other times I recognize that I need to find someone else in order to best serve the project.

I don't know about you, but I'd prefer that people share honest criticism with me rather than just stroke my ego.

That's a hard thing for a lot of people to do.
 
Oh sorry Papa....Panalook2 but I have to say the influence of the Nikon lenses is also a factor. They do tend to warm things up a little.
 
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