"THE PHOTOGRAPHER" Short film

Henry701

Henry701

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Hello,

"The Photographer" is a short film I am working on right now. This is my first real short film that actually looks pretty good (so far) and makes sense.

The site for the film can be found here:

http://icefire.eigen-4rt.info/

There's not that much on the site, more will be added as it is still under construction.

Here's a snapshot of a scene: http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1549/snapshot2qk3.jpg

A video will be up soon, just have to check something with a music composer.
 
This is a "test" video of the Intro scene of the film.

https://www.yousendit.com/download/Q01GWWV1YStRWUpjR0E9PQ (82Mb .mov file)

I need to reshoot 1 or 2 shots and make the contrast a lot less. The music is by Scott Glasgow, he gave me permission to use his music some time a ago for a short film. I've send an e-mail to him asking if it was still ok, and will take it down if it's not (but i'm pretty sure that it's all good, he seemed like a cool person).

Comments and criticism are welcome for this video.
 
Alrifght
Here is my imput. The half-assed zoom in at the beginning revealing somebody was taking a picture was GOOD.
the guy's shaky handy holding the camera (we only see shaky lenses) is confusing. If there is no reason for him to be shaking (something we're going to find out) re-do it and have him be still. Besides that shot I saw a lot of bad pans and tilts, but its just because you seem to have a crappy tripod that gets stuck.

I'd love to know what the story is about. So far it looks like it can go somewhere.
 
That all correct Charlie.

There are a couple shots I am reshooting, and the pans and tilts are because of my crappy tripod, I think a new tripod head would make it a lot easier to get nice pans.

Thanks for the comment.
 
Alright, the shots are reshot and I think I have improved alot, will post the video in a couple of days. I think I'm going to go with a red/orange grading style. I had that grading before, but now with more/better looking shots I'm beginning to think it fits better.

I have created a Poster just for fun, tell me what you think.

Higher resolution:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5075/poster002ev8.png

poster003rm3.png
 
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