Diary for: Heaven, U.S.A short film

Charlie06

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Figured I'd share my experiences shooting HEAVEN, U.S.A
I'll keep updating as I go

Heaven, U.S.A, like many other short films, started as a conversation
I was talking to a member of our crew about religion and that's where the story developed

We always feel forced to defend out believes, whether we are being attacked or not.
We believe other people are ignorant, while they think that we are naive
It'd hard to just let people be happy with what they believe.

The Story developed and we decided "no more short films about idiotic killing suspense where every actor is the same age, same race, and same style" We made sure in the creation of the script that we combined different races, and ages.

The synopsis

Jamie, a young teenager, has to deal with her mentally disabled brother who has faith that going to church and praying to god will help their unemployed mom get her job back. Arriving to the conclusion that God wouldn't give her brother a dissability and make the mother lose the job and her father, Jamie believes that praying is stupid and therefore does not do anything.

That changes as she is forced to chase down a boy who has stolen a kite from a store she was going to apply for a job at. The boy has been trying to send a letter to Heaven to his mother, who passed away. Just like Jamie, the boy's father has told him to stop trying to contact her, that it was stupid, and would not bring her back.

CREW

3 man crew, which included me, Angel Ramirez, who was the production manager and script supervisor for the film, and Andy, who plays Jamie's brother Adam

Equipment + format + workflow

The short was filmed on a canon XH A1 shooting 60i at 1080i. Recently bought was a steadicam Merlin which played a big part in the film. For most of the production an Audio Technica shotgun mic was used with a rode boom pole. It was edited through FCP in a macbook pro connected to a big hd monitor.

The objective

Wanting to be a professional Director of Photography I wanted to have something to build my reel. Past work (high school television production class) was not going to cut it and I felt that I had grown a lot as far as experience.
 
On screenshots

On screenshots

Here are a few screenies from the film
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On the Poster for the Film

On the Poster for the Film

This is the poster for the film
Let me know what you guys think of it

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On location Scouting

On location Scouting

I wanted more than one location for this film. So we decided to scout what places could be used as we were writing the script.

These locations include

A park
A soldier memorial in the center of Little Village in Chicago
The Japanesse Gardens in Chicago
2 different homes
A store that would house the kite that was meant to be stolen.

Problems with location

As you can imagine, these locations were mostly pretty easy to find
I loved the atmosphere in the soldier memorial in Little Village and decided it was a good place for the chase scene to go through. Here is a picture of it.
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I visited the Japanesse garden not long ago and fell in loved with it, and promised something would be shot there.

The store
The store was the hardest thing to find
I knew I wanted a store that had the entire toy isle in the back wall that was parallel to the wall with the cash resgister, that way the clerk could see the boy as he was about to steal it. We went to many stores. Found some pretty good ones, but they would not give us permission to shoot there, with the excuse that they were not the owners, and could not allow.

We entered one dollar store, that magically had only 2 isles, with the toys facing the parallel wall to the cash register, in the perfect place where I needed it. The clerk happened to be the owner. We told her about the project and she really liked it, she liked it enough that she asked to be the store owner in the film. For a small fee of 50$ for shooting there, we got our location for 2 hours on a wednesday.
 
On the trailer

On the trailer

Oh yes, by the way the trailer can also be found here
vimeo.com/1210202
 
While just looking around

While just looking around

Looking around online

I found a composer looking for work. I looked at some of his work and liked it, contacted him, showed him the teaser, and he loved it. He has been composing the music for the film for almost 5 days now. Very exciting. Only problem is, he is in Germany, so it's hell having to render and upload the whole movie and sometimes clips every-time we decide to change something.

So far I love what he's done. He offers great suggestions and really seems to understand the story. Soundtrack is due on Friday and the whole movie must be on DVD by Sunday morning.

One post got erased, or did mods erase it...

Anyways
Been working on DVD label, I'm keeping it simple

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Whooo

Whooo

Heaven, U.S.A. is finally complete!
The soundtrack by Toxu Kim is great, and helps drive the emotional mood of the story
He's from Berlin, but has great talent and is very devoted to his work.
You can find him here.

myspace.com/toxukim

Only problem has been
Exporting
Finding the right settings for the 9:50 min short film
I'm using NTSC compression on 720x480
Looks great on my laptop
Looks Okay in DVD studio Pro.. a bit pixelated.
BURNT dvd and put it on my television.

IT LOOKS AWFUL
colors are way oversaturated

After googling online I found that color correcting monitor has to be set to same color profile as most telvisions. So I did that and started color correcting again, and am currently exporting the new movie file. So far so good.

Distribution...Why not?
Good time has been spent on this film. some profit has to be made, which will help buy some equipment for next production I assume. Besides. I want the film to be seen :).

Let me know if you guys have any tips for distributing a short film.
 
Good News

Good News

Hey guys
If you been following this small thread I have some good news about Heaven, U.S.A

I'm submitting for Distribution with indieFlix, and will be selling the film for 2.99 I hope you guys will support me as I try to raise money for the next film (which will be a feature)

Heaven U.S.A sold its first copy today for $5 :)!!
The first copy to come out of the replicator and recieve the Label sold within 3 minutes, I thought that was pretty cool :).

Heaven U.S.A has a good message. It's not a psychological thriller about some killing of some loved one done by the protagonist even though he doesn't know it. It's more of a family film

A little Background on me if you'd like to know

I am Peruvian (that's from Peru hehe)
I am 18,
I'm trying hard to break into the industry.
I've tried to have all of my jobs be in the film/video field

First one was at the school Television Studio
Second one was at Chicago's Fletchers camera rental/sales company
Third so far is being a cameraman for a Church Television show
My rate when I started was $50 an hour, and I was really excited thinking I'm on my way. But they could not afford it, so I took it down to $25 :P

So For other good news. I'm arranging Heaven, U.S.A to be shown in the show, which airs on channel 18(or 17 I forget) WJYS in Chicago, broadcasting in supposedly 3 million homes. If 60 Thousand people see it, It will be more than enough

So far it has received great reviews.
I'm trying to get it a review by Ain't it cool News
The church (since Heaven, U.S.A has in a way a religious message) is backing me up and sponsoring me as far as DVD replication, labeling and casing goes.

So far so good!
 
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On distribution

On distribution

Today I send in the master to Indieflix and Createspace with the contracts.
If everything goes well, Heaven, U.S.A should be featured in Faith in Action, a show that air on Chicago's WJYS. I'm quite excited as more people who have seen the trailer are asking for copies. So far 4 copies have been sold making $20 (yay! lol) and 5 are reserved to be sold. Once it airs on the show I will ask if its possible for them to make a message that if people liked it, they can buy it from the church as a donation to Charlie's next film.

Taking advantage of all resources. I know getting distribution for indie features is very hard, so I'm trying to learn to market myself now, with a small piece, and see how far I can take it.

We spent $110 on the film $50 for store location (which we really didn't need to, but we felt we had to) and rest on food and tapes.

If Heaven, U.S.A just makes $220, then I will have doubled the investment (even though on a microscopic scale) and I will have succeeded in making a profit, getting small distribution, getting it aired on television, and having work to show for my reel of director of photography.

Thank you guys for your comments, they encourage to keep taking the next step.
 
On the Dvd Cover

On the Dvd Cover

Hey guys

This is the DVD cover that I'm sending to IndieFlix and createspace.
I think it'll look cool when it's on a physical case
Comments are welcome

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On the Demo reel

On the Demo reel

As I've said before, the film was initially made to have more work for my D.P reel. Here are some shots I decided to include from Heaven, U.S.A

I would GREATLY appreciate your opinion as I'm trying to get better and some feedback on what looks good, what needs to be changed, done better and how, would just make my day.

http://vimeo.com/1522513
 
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