THREE pm - by Red Ant Productions

I think there was a lot information to cram into a 6 minute short film. The acting was pretty bad and cheesy. I think the editing could probably help. I did however; like how all the character were yelling all at the same time. He gets out of the car, shuts the door and the screaming stops. This is definitely one of those films where you have to suspend reality. The ending… well, just wrapped up so fast I had to go back and re-read what was wrote.

Congrats on entering the fest.
 
You got a cool idea however I agree with Justin that it's hard to fit everything into just 6 minutes. I think you can take out the thief scene and your movie is still good. I got this problem with my first fest also. Anyway, the movie is hilarious. I enjoyed it. You did a nice job! Congrats!
 
hehe, nice one, thank you! took a while for me to get into it, but I still enjoyed it :)
 
Hey,

Just caught the flick. I had a good time watching and really dug the concept. The acting, in my opinion was really nice. I really liked the "lead" or mentally challenged guy's acting. Especially at the beginning. I thought he sold that character really well.

I thought that it was fun to have all of the different charactes come together and have them end together. It was nice to see a comedy and this premise is great. I also liked that all of them had their individual reasons for needing to be somewhere in a certain amount of time. A very good use of the theme there.

However, while I liked the concept of the three (four) strangers converging in the cab, I thought it was a bit shallow in that we never got to know one character very well. Which could have worked better, but we spent so much time on the "lead" character at the beginning and so little on the other people that it felt unbalanced.

Otherwise, a nice idea that, for me, could have used some polish but an enjoyable watch. Keep up the good work.
 
I enjoyed this short - despite all its flaws it drew me along with it and I laughed to the end. Which goes to show you had a great little story here with all these different characters ending up in the same taxi, all in a hurry for different reasons. I think if the script, pacing, acting etc had been more hammered into shape, this could have been a really good short. As it was, it was an enjoyable ride. Thanks.

Jason
 
Story was pretty good and funny. The gunshot could have used work, and I think I would have done without the fake ignition sounds. Good job and good luck!
 
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