FAT MONSTER FILMS presents "O2" ... Every. Breath. Counts.

By the way, Michael's comments about the dynamics between the crew got me thinking that some of you may find interesting the fact that the original story involved a joint Russian-American mission. We cast Tim Abell (Sam) as the all-american astronaut type and had cast a Russian actor to play opposite of Ana as her husband. Thus, the original script played off of some political tension and had a number of lines spoken in Russian (some with subtitles and some without).

We even had gone so far as to have "seething" Mike Hechanova shoot footage in Times Square and at NBC where he was working so that we could cut to a crowd scene with the story breaking on the big SONY monitor in Times Square. We also had developed a rather cool technique to recreate NASA Mission Control that I hated to lose.

However, two things occurred: 1) we lost our Russian male actor; and, 2) we started looking closely at our set and realized that the ship wouldn't really work as a contemporary NASA-style space station. As we worked on casting a replacement for our Russian actor JDS remembered that he had gone to school with Todd Lowe and knew that he was no longer doing Gilmore Girls and was yet to begin shooting his HBO series. Jack called Todd and he agreed to jump on board. With the whole Russian/American conflict discarded we realized that a whole new interesting dynamic would arise by casting Tim Abell as Ana's husband.

Frankly, this is the kind of stuff that is worth spun gold to me. As film makers we are really god-like in our ability to create these worlds from nothing. By going through the process of developing the original script into what you see on the screen now, we really learned an amazing amount. I give a whole bunch of credit to Tim, who always seems able to see the bigger picture and is more than willing to "kill off our babies" if it will serve the story or allow us to move the ball towards finishing a production in time.
 
So if you walked into a room with 2 dead friends lying there... the FIRST thing you'd do is watch the TV before looking at them to assess the situation?

Don't take this the wrong way... your thoughtful critique was obviously appreciated... and this isn't even my film, but I actually considered that pause and stare to be perfect... like he's understanding what happened and trying to process it before watching the video (which I assumed he was already planning to do)... I actually called Tim about this prior to the release and complimented him on the pacing of that moment, because it's the point where the whole story flips... and a lot is riding on the character of Trevor for the audience... I thought that part was very logical.

Okay, I want to be real clear on my point and then I want to move on because I really don't want this to dominate the thread of a really good film.

You are totally misunderstanding my point. What I felt in that scene is that he noticed the video screen too quickly and almost mechanically went to it instead of showing a slow realization that there was something he needed to see...it's just a subtle thing in terms of how the actor portrays this. It has nothing to do with when he sees it, it has everything to do with how he recognizes it when he does.

I can't make it any plainer than that. So let's just move on and assume it's just my issue seeing as no one else seems to have had the same reaction. :beer:
 
We even had gone so far as to have "seething" Mike Hechanova shoot footage in Times Square and at NBC where he was working so that we could cut to a crowd scene with the story breaking on the big SONY monitor in Times Square.

I give a whole bunch of credit to Tim, who always seems able to see the bigger picture and is more than willing to "kill off our babies"

Hyten killed off my babies.... damn him.
 
Hey guys,

I think you're gonna have to rename your production company "Phat Monster" after this one.

Incredible effort in every way...

Best wishes for the Gold!
 
Erik,

Thanks so much for the note. I hope we can work with you down the road. Your stuff is pristine, dude. Amazing stuff and I'm happy to now have your site bookmarked.
 
Michael, we appreciate SO MUCH your comments and suggestions. I've come to truly respect your work so that thoughtful analysis from you is a very much appreciated gift. I wish you could have been hanging with us during some of our preproduction meetings so that you could be privy to the interesting discussions we had along the lines you have brought up. Also, I must tell you that I have not yet watched "The Watchman" and I am anticipating doing so today. The films came out while I was on the road north and I'm still up here in San Jose trying to give every film a careful view in between my work obligations.
Mark, you're a class act. I would have loved to have sat in on those meetings.
Just to observe would have been a pleasure and an honour. I'm sure I would have learned so much.

Hope you like The Watchman.
Edit: Just read your review in my thread. Glad you liked it! :)

Cheers,

Mike
 
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To say I liked it is modest. I loved your work dude. I gotta also say I especially enjoyed the IM transcript Ben posted. Priceless!

I'm getting ready to watch their film with great anticipation. Gotta get another latte .... then on with the show....
 
To say I liked it is modest. I loved your work dude. I gotta also say I especially enjoyed the IM transcript Ben posted. Priceless!

I'm getting ready to watch their film with great anticipation. Gotta get another latte .... then on with the show....
Thanks again! I quoted you in my sig BTW. :)
If you don't want it there just PM me and I'll remove it. No problem.

Yah, that late night transcript was hilarious. :D

Cheers!

Mike
 
You hear this GUYS!? Put down the Latte's and pick up the (virtual) pencils.

Time to write, right?

We've been working on this for awhile but haven't been talking about it. This week we did actually get a big part of the funding nailed down so that the Fat Monster feature is more than the sparkle in Luis's eye at last! Needless to say, we're enthused and we'll look forward to reporting on our progress as we move forward.
 
I thought this film was great! Everything was perfect! (well duh, its fat monster...) The setting was absolutely amazing! My mom walked in and thought I was watching star trek on my computer. haha

Great job guys! Can't wait to see what you do next!
 
We've been working on this for awhile but haven't been talking about it. This week we did actually get a big part of the funding nailed down so that the Fat Monster feature is more than the sparkle in Luis's eye at last! Needless to say, we're enthused and we'll look forward to reporting on our progress as we move forward.

Great news Mark, we'll all be cheering you on. I'll get round to comments on O2 soon, promise. Oh, and I think Clarkage is also a great addition to the forum!
 
Sir, may I say that your short film was amazing. As one of those people that occasionally critique movies, usually in the movie theatre while the previews are going, I have to say, TWO thumbs Way up!

Also, your set is amazing, I loved, and still do love the t.v. show Firefly, so much in fact that I bought, sadly, the only season they made, PLUS, the Firefly movie, Serenity.

Now for technical appreciations.

The lighting was beautiful
The attention to detail, ie sweat on the actors, little whisps of smoke. Loved it.
The beautiful story, beginning, middle and end.
The sacrifice the captain and his wife gave, great, I feared that there was going to be one of those 'blah zay blah' Indie Film endings where he just dies. I so appreciate movies with self sacrifice. Sometimes I think it's the only way to show real love in film.

Again, thank you.

Kenn aKa Enoch aKa The Gun Kicker Person Guy
 
We've been working on this for awhile but haven't been talking about it. This week we did actually get a big part of the funding nailed down so that the Fat Monster feature is more than the sparkle in Luis's eye at last! Needless to say, we're enthused and we'll look forward to reporting on our progress as we move forward.

Woohoo! If you need any help with it, let me know! (Did I already say that? I can't remember. Maybe I just really want to help that bad...)
 
Great film. Awesome location, great effects work, great acting, great story, great ending.

A few moments seemed a little iffy writing-wise. But I think the acting was strong enough to make the lines work. I have to admit that for whatever reason I wasn't the hugest fan of the "Critical Depletion" screen. It seems like something created for a movie about a ship losing oxygen, not like a real warning message. I think that it's a little too artful looking.

Know that I'm just nitpicking. I LOVED this film. Oh, and this is almost pathetic, but... the ending made me cry.
 
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