Music Video for Friend - AND NO FXS SKILLS

[USLatin]

SO... I don't know what I am doing!
I shot this practically alone with a friend that doesn't do this,
so basically did 80% of everything he helped gripping sort-of,
and he had some good ideas...

It was shot it three 1/2 to 1/4 days , bare HVX Fig Rig, Focus Head,
two kinos (a 500W and a 100W) and also had a 650W tungsten equivalent HMI

I really need some ideas of what to insert before he cleans up to make it more dynamic...
like hand held shots on the Fig like the medium of her walking out to the door... but what?
I have a few but nothing I am satisfied with given that I wanted to make it seem he was up late.

Thanks!

Every Time (original link)



EDIT:
LATEST CUT HERE

 

[Zander]

Broken link.

 

[Derrick_SA]

edit your post and add HTTP:// before the www then it wil work from this page.

- Derrick

 

[Derrick_SA]

it's referencing the wrong place, click this:

http://www.zumovalusa.com/DELETE/Nameless10.mp4

working

- Derrick

 

[USLatin]

thanks Derrick... it is going, I just copied it from yours

 

[USLatin]

Updated the first post with the latest cut... I would really appreciate some ideas and suggestions... I have no idea what I am doing