The Death of Magic

Alright... kinda weird for my taste, but I got it. Not bad. Perhaps should have gone deeper into the subject. Maybe about what Christmas is like for homeless people? Then juxtaposition that with a happy wealthy family x-mas.
 
Thanks for watching, Nat.

Should have gone deeper, you say?

I think it said just enough. Like most poets I have my own bozo definition of poetry that goes like this: Poetry is the art of including everything without having to say everything.

Inspiring people to think, to ponder further, to see relations and meaning in a larger context radiating around the original idea would be in my view a succesful poem or film.

tra-la-la,
lmr
 
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