Italian First Music Video - Dvx100AE

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Gianco

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Hi all,

this is my first post in this section.
I hope you enjoy it even if it's an italian HIP HOP song...

It's my real first serious music video of this italian band.
Song is about war and victims.

I posted it here because I just need advices and suggestions on my work..

Thanks for any comment on it even if you don't speak Italian..
I appreciate it..

Link for the music video: http://www.vimeo.com/762885

Gianco
 
No comments or suggestions?

No comments or suggestions?

Gianco said:
Hi all,

this is my first post in this section.
I hope you enjoy it even if it's an italian HIP HOP song...

It's my real first serious music video of this italian band.
Song is about war and victims.

I posted it here because I just need advices and suggestions on my work..

Thanks for any comment on it even if you don't speak Italian..
I appreciate it..

Link for the music video: http://www.vimeo.com/762885

Gianco
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Noone has any comments or suggestions to help me to understand where I make mistakes?

Thanks,
Gianco
 
Not bad at all for a 1st MusicVid. Here as some things that struck me:

- Some of the scenes are too dark, especially in the scenes
where the guys is in prison.

- I saw some interlacing artifact during some of the news footage,
might want to try to de-interlace that, but it might have been vimeo...

- On some shots with a lot of sky behind the artists the sky
is too blown out, maybe some sky-replacement could help fix this.

- A couple of times the dancer's moves are a little behind or
too early compared to the music so maybe tighten the edit
a little there. (eg 3:10)

- At 2:25 the black gun one of the singers is holding looks fake...
Like he's holding a small plastic gun. It might have been better
to leave that shot out entirely.


Don't take this the wrong way, not trying to be negative, just give constructive critisism.


Good luck

PS: I don't know how official this tune is but you do know the soundtrack
beneath the vocals is from 'donde hubo el fuego/Eddie Dee' right?
 
Thanks Don Camillo,

I appreciate any suggestions and critics because I know to be a beginner at now..
The interlacing artifact was something I leave just as it was to make the difference between video and news but probably you're right..

I confess not to be been too worry about the fx in post, light sky replacement and stuff like that, I'm still a novice but I will follow your suggestions...

Gun was like a real one...same weight, same size..it seems fake? I'll check it out..

Thanks for everything, I'll keep studying...

Gianco
 
I enjoyed it! Cool song, cool video. But for whatever reason, I found that when a still picture was shown, it kinda took away from the "feel" for me. Maybe using footage/video from those segments (rather than frames) would have made a more dramatic effect? But at the same time you did use some video from the news and stuff... Either way I enjoyed it!
 
Video removed

Video removed

I thank you everybody who watched that video..
I had to delete it cause it's going to partecipate to a show where it had never been published...
so, it should be inedited..

Thanks anyway,
Gianco
IT
 
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