THE MOIRÈ EFFECT - a new short film by Ted Arabian

Script Update...

First revision is completed.

Based on some really great suggestions and observations (as well as a few ideas that came to me) this has become much tighter and much more interesting story (I think!).

I am sure that when the "panel of script advisors" get done, there will be a 2nd revision in the works. But I think that this is VERY close to complete. :thumbsup:


Thanks again, guys! :beer:
 
I wish I had a script update. We still are stuck with a sequence of scenes that don't tie together very well! rewrite, rewrite, rewrite!
 
sfoster said:
...rewrite, rewrite, rewrite!
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tell me about it!

in fact,

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Attention Script Review Board... I have updated Rev.2 as per some more great feedback! (thanks Demo!)

So, IF you have downloaded the script PRIOR to 2:25pm today, please re-download it.

(I didn't want to have to PM you all with another new link.)

Thanks for your help in this "mission!"

-Ted
 
Once again, I just received a handful of AMAZING notes. I am so stoked to start working on Revision numero THREE!

Thanks Dudley!

-Ted
 
Thanks Jason. It is a work in progress and will likely change again!

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Just finished Rev. 3 of the script!!! I am loving this story. I cannot wait to shoot it.

Time for the Script Review Board to put their glasses back on! Ted needs new feedback! (new link in PM)
 
this update is also on Post #2 with other transmissions...

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ummm... yeah, I gave Mark a bit of a nod in the cast!

i couldn't resists!

:)
 
Ted, you rock. I always wanted to be a general! To this day my favorite character in all of movie-dom is George C. Scott as a general. ... No, not as Patton. His role as General "Buck" Turgidson from Dr. Strangelove is the best friggin' character EVER.
 
haha! I am glad to promote you, Mark! Maybe I'll have that General take on that character! :grin: That would be a riot!!!

And thanks Dudley, you taught me so much in a short time. I can't thank you enough for the help.
 
just wondering am I going to need a barf bag for your movie...due to the effect of course not the movie itself...

and I know you'll do awesome...thats all Ted knows
 
no, no... I will not being submitting a 6 minute example of a moire pattern! :)

This will be pretty cool though!
 
Mark, I know that I am not all that hip.... so can you tell me what the heck that post is about?

Is all of that for the entry on 23:30???

Where DO you find this stuff???

Thanks! (I think) :)
 
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