Car Garage One | XLH1 | Filmed in Bath

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Andii

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Well this isnt that impressive but what the hell its a sample. I did this for... yes £300 I just cant find any work at all, I need help, i need a salesman but i cant afford to look after myself let alone hire someone as well!

I hope he got a bargin i drove the length of the bloody country to film this.

xlh1

www.media73.co.uk/videos/Bath/Bath.html
 
Good footage but needs to be re-cut.


Yes, he is a cheap bastard.

But, what does that say about your negotiation skills?

Like you said, maybe you need a salesman?



Keep at it man!

It's good stuff! :beer:
 
Re-cut -- my ass! (sorry, ESTEBEVERDE)

No, no, don't touch it! This is wonderfully respectable work!

The style of it is well-defined and consistent, the shots are well-composed and beautifully toned, and it drives itself forward with a perfect, laid-back and cool pace, complemented very nicely by the music. And my favorite part is that it's not so stylized that it's overwhelming. Just the right amount of style to evoke an atmosphere.

My hat's off to you, man. This may be one of the best corporate/commercial gigs I've seen yet.

P.S. I saw some of your car footage over on the Redrock Micro forums; you really like cars, don't you?
 
Like I said, I think it needs re-cut.

It's a little jerkey for me and a bit awkward in a few spots.

I love the shots and colour. But it didn't feel smooth to me.

It felt a bit forced.
 
Thanks guys, all comments welcomed. Estebverde can I ask how you would improve it? I am not going to re cut, but your thoughts would be interesting.

thanks again.
 
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