"Merry Lonely Christmas" shot w/ HVX, Brevis & Nikon primes

Erik,
shots are good, and concept is good. You really need a story though. Also you hit the nail on the head when you said Dark (I know you meant a different dark-lol)- I think you should have light it differently. I can go into massive details on story and lighting, and laying things out, but again my opinions. Congrats on making something, while I lay on my butt and do taxes..

I liked the SFX but the light shift in the blood at the end kills me.
 
lighting wise it was dark, but it fit really well.

i thought it was awesome. solid piece.
 
I liked it. Pacing was nice, but I agree the lighting could really use some help.

How did you export that for youtube?? looked about as good as anything I've ever seen on there...
 
Really cliche, seen it a million times before type story. Why not try being a little creatve with this theme? The lighting needs work too.
 
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