24: Hour Pizza Delivery - An internet series

Ok those two episodes were not only hilarious but the editing was incredible. "You son of a *****, how did you get my dollar?" CLASSIC...
 
Holy crap that was awesome! The only advice I can give you is the effects looked really hokey and off sync. I suppose you used After Effects for that? Try using Motion tracking for the fire and playing with layer blending to make it a bit more realistic. Also there's some really good gunshot muzzle flashes from videocopilot.net

Awesome work though! Really enjoyed that!
 
Thanks for the positive replys. I was scared film people might be a little harsh on this. The film people I meet in real life scoff at anything remotely silly. Its nice to have a community of film makers that aren't limited in scope of appreciate to Tarantino, Lynch, or Moore. My sister was an RTF graduate at UT and I got to see some of her peers films and literally in one class alone there were multiple black and white silent films staring either a clown or an abused wife.
Charlie Anderson said:
Try using Motion tracking for the fire and playing with layer blending to make it a bit more realistic.
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I did use motion tracking but the camera is just going so nuts and the car is still moving it was very difficult. I had to attempt the motion tracking from numerous spots backwards and forwards then manually edit it. I also did layer blending but honestly with a camera moving like that I just couldn't personally do any better. In the future I'll use sticks with effects shots.
 
Socksta said:
Thanks for the positive replys. I was scared film people might be a little harsh on this. The film people I meet in real life scoff at anything remotely silly. Its nice to have a community of film makers that aren't limited in scope of appreciate to Tarantino, Lynch, or Moore. My sister was an RTF graduate at UT and I got to see some of her peers films and literally in one class alone there were multiple black and white silent films staring either a clown or an abused wife.
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Ahh the clown. The clown flipping a pancake... crying.

Well I like to think that there are two types of film makers. The artist, and the entertainer. Sometimes it can be hand in hand, but sometimes it's not. I like to think of most of us here as entertainers.

As for your stuff... holy mother fling Christopher that was good! The only stuff that stood out as amature was the effects. Great actors BTw, especially the main one plying Jack. He may not look like him exactly, but he's got the voice. Love the biting. There are some quotable lines in there.

Will you be doing anymore? I hope so.
 
heh, i posted this in the cafe a few days ago. Great work, loved it especially the amount of work that went into something this ridiculous.
Edit: saw your post there. Looking forward to more eps.
 
Once again thank you everybody for the positive comments.
Jon Starr said:
I like to think that there are two types of film makers. The artist, and the entertainer. Sometimes it can be hand in hand, but sometimes it's not.
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I am actually going to use this line from now on when I tell people I am a film maker(I guess 2 videos gives me that title?). I don't mind showing people my work but I really hate telling people I make videos because they usually follow with a porn joke then they leave thinking I'm the clown filming jerk off.
 
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