It starts out ok but the camera was way too shaky in some of the shots. I was also had trouble with the inconsistencies in the look sometimes it looked really clean and crisp other times everything was granny and out of focus. That grain filter was a little over done. Also you may wish to fix those muzzle flashes a bit.
Let the work speak for itself. If it's good it's good, if it sucks then it sucks. I don't care how old you are.
The outdoor stuff looked pretty good. The camera movement is a little crazy but I can deal. The two lines that are delivered are not the strongest, although they got the point across. Your lighting in the indoor scene is pretty harsh. It looks like the lights were right on top of the actor.
I wold change the text at the end to blend with that of the other graphic elements already used before.
i did have a dp on the shoot, but it was both our first time using the redrock... we were lent an hd bundle by redrock themselves and we got it the day befoe the shoot... so it was a short learning and we had to shoot... the points with the grain we done with the M2 not turned on... it was being used for dramaitc effects
Yo, Zacatac! It's nice to see somebody else from SI on the DVXuser forum. Just saying. You've already heard my input on the trailer I believe. At least I think you have.