Dahopafilms
Well-known member
OK - this was very clever. You had me wondering about the title throughout.
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Loved the black & white bracketing at the beginning and the end. The actors were great - your male lead was perfect (never liked him from the get-go and was pleased with his "end"). Really liked the waitress, too - very believable - very good actress.
Liked the male lead's sprinting along the side of the building to catch up and then slowing and walking normally as he rounds the corner.
Nice locations. Great diner (now I want to eat there).
In the "things I wasn't sold on" category, I thought the dispatching of the spy girl with briefcase was a little predictable - as was the fight with the three thugs. But I thought the rest of the short more than made up for that.
Truly enjoyed this one. Nice job.
******Spolier warnings below*************
Loved the black & white bracketing at the beginning and the end. The actors were great - your male lead was perfect (never liked him from the get-go and was pleased with his "end"). Really liked the waitress, too - very believable - very good actress.
Liked the male lead's sprinting along the side of the building to catch up and then slowing and walking normally as he rounds the corner.
Nice locations. Great diner (now I want to eat there).
In the "things I wasn't sold on" category, I thought the dispatching of the spy girl with briefcase was a little predictable - as was the fight with the three thugs. But I thought the rest of the short more than made up for that.
Truly enjoyed this one. Nice job.