Secret Admiration - a film by Gary French

haha, glad you are not getting sued over DVXfest man.
Looking forward to the fruit of your headaches :grin:
 
you can sleep when you're dead

you can sleep when you're dead

As a member of this fantastic crew, I say that I was glad it was over, but sad that we dont have a project to work on...glad because I could sleep now...Gary was a slave driver, as you can tell in the pic of us lying down from being worked so hard. :huh:. It was fun!

:laugh:


for Gary...
:nads:
 
good thing I brought my backup emergency kit with me that day of the shoot lol...kids do come in handy everyonce in a while...jk
 
awww...Gary I'm gonna... throw up in my mouth...jk! :dankk2:Thanks for putting up with me...we look great on here yeah for us noob film makers!!! I hope people watch our flick...guess no one watched it :(
 
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Standard Disclaimer: I've yet to see a bad film so far in this fest. Congratulations to every film maker, everyone did a great job. All my comments and criticisms are meant to be constructive and helpful and in no way am I trying to take anything away from what you accomplished.

Good: Liked the plot twist. The slo mo and the music went very well together.

Not as Good: Didn't like the voice over that much, the gun shot seemed fake, didn't really like the ending line.
 
First off, I think I'm in love! Just don't tell my wife. :)
The lead actress actually looks a bit like her.

Secondly, I think you needed a few shots of him actually spying on her. I think that would have helped a bit. Seeing her reading, maybe a shot of him in the background, looking over a magazine. Nothing obvious, just subtle.

Lastly, the shot did sound fake but that's an easy fix. I loved the look of this short and the ending was awesome!

You should be proud. Nice work overall, I really enjoyed this one.

Mike
 
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