Dirty Raw Comedy shot with DVX

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one03wannabe

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Here is a short I put together in a few hours. I got REALLY bored at work and wrote the script in a bout 45 minutes. Then, once I got home I made my roommates act it out for me. (No experience prior) I also have a cameo in the film. I'm the dude laying in the bed. Let us know what you think. :) Remember, it's pretty raw.


http://emuse.ebaumsworld.com/video/watch/8854
 
Here is a short I put together in a few hours. I got REALLY bored at work and wrote the script in a bout 45 minutes. Then, once I got home I made my roommates act it out for me. (No experience prior) I also have a cameo in the film.
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Looks exactly like all of this.
 
as far as comedy goes, i thought it was pretty weak. too many f-bombs and
not enough funny dialogue. just my opinion.
 
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