Kyle Stebbins
AD GURU
Let me just say, first, that I did not expect a movie of this quality when I first encountered the thread. While your smoke effects and weapons looked fantastic in the grabs, I was very concerned for the acting and numerous other elements that would tag along with a high school level production.
That being said, while your production value was considerably high, there were several issues that still needed to be reworked, IMO. The biggest things that stood out for me were the muzzle flashes, the acting, and (on the more technical side) the aspect ratio... perhaps that was google video's fault, but I didn't want to download a huge 400+ mb file, especially since I don't belong to any of those upload sites you listed. (Also, if you have any questions about using Quicktime h.264 compressions, shoot me a PM or search the site... it's a MUCH better idea to compress using Quicktime than Windows Media. WMV is awful, if you ask me. Truly awful.)
I'm sorry that this review is short, and I really really want to get a full one churned out by the end of the week. You guys did a very good job! You should be proud! Get this into festivals!!
-Kyle
That being said, while your production value was considerably high, there were several issues that still needed to be reworked, IMO. The biggest things that stood out for me were the muzzle flashes, the acting, and (on the more technical side) the aspect ratio... perhaps that was google video's fault, but I didn't want to download a huge 400+ mb file, especially since I don't belong to any of those upload sites you listed. (Also, if you have any questions about using Quicktime h.264 compressions, shoot me a PM or search the site... it's a MUCH better idea to compress using Quicktime than Windows Media. WMV is awful, if you ask me. Truly awful.)
I'm sorry that this review is short, and I really really want to get a full one churned out by the end of the week. You guys did a very good job! You should be proud! Get this into festivals!!
-Kyle