The Crimes of Mr. Lowry "Official Thread"

[marlontorres]

Just wanted to share my film noir animation/live action film "The Crimes of Mr. Lowry". Been working on it for 3 months and currently still a work in progress. Shot with an XL2 and entirely on green screen.

http://www.citizencine.com/films/crimesofmrlowry.mov

 

[Paul Coleman]

Loved it. Acting is a bit unsteady, and the music is drowning the dialog somewhat. The process is great. Your frames are great.:beer:

 

[marlontorres]

Thanks for the feedback, gives me the opportunity to make some tweaks before i turn it in for film finals at school.

 

[Paul Coleman]

No problem.:thumbsup:

 

[marlontorres]

Loved it. Acting is a bit unsteady, and the music is drowning the dialog somewhat. The process is great. Your frames are great.:beer:

I guess you just don't like my actor, you didn't like him in Junipero too... haha.

 

[Paul Coleman]

I guess you just don't like my actor, you didn't like him in Junipero too... haha.

Sorry.:embarasse The writing/direction is taking risks, so the actors have to be amazing.

 

[marlontorres]

Sorry.:embarasse The writing/direction is taking risks, so the actors have to be amazing.

It's fine, its tough to get access to real actors as a student.

 

[divxil]

GREAT!
good job man. would like to see some other stuff you made.
enjoyed it very much 5/5

 

[marlontorres]

GREAT!
good job man. would like to see some other stuff you made.
enjoyed it very much 5/5

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Check out my my short film "junipero".

http://www.citizencine.com/films/junipero/junipero_web.mov