my Heart Is Vain - a cut 2 the chase production (VersuS & Deneb79)

However, I havent made any changes to the version you read, maybe just added stuff from the english version to the greek one. I am also at the office right now so dont have lots of time to compare them again and see if there are really any big changes.
 
OK I HAD TO DO SOMETHING!

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VersuS said:
Oh dear....the english version I sent you was a version4 refined with more direction/cinematography touches. I used this one to make the version5 which is a Greek version.

LOL!
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Oh, yeah... don't worry about that .

sorry. Didn't think of that!
 
UPDATE

We ditched the Dad/Mom characters from the script. The scene where they appeared remains but the part where they had a bit of action was dropped coz it didn't really serve any purpose and it actually made things more complex in terms of what I want to tell the viewer.

So far I am at Script version #6 and getting ready for lucky 7.
 
OK, they gave me the Executive Producer position, the Boom Operator, the VFX Artist and the Script Proof Reading position, I don't know what John is cooking but seems like he wants to get away with just sitting on the chair... and from what I've learned lately they want me to provide the food. Man something fishy is going on here! LOL!
 
UPDATE - LYRICS OF MOVIE SONG

Self- Inflicted

Take me in my safe place
We are here and share this pain
And you see the trouble in my brain
In my body, in my veins

Where it happens, where it leads
I’m unbroken, I’m not real
My decisions left me bare
And my people, they don’t care

Self-inflicted wounds I heal
Trying to punch this card and leave
Self-inflicted wounds I heal
But our time does not stand still

Left to my own little space
Curling up, hugging my face
Put the misery back on the shelf
Serve me with your dear old self

Love me like you always did
Before he spread me with disease
Days and nights, seem to go on and on
Thousand lights inside my phone
Tearing through my clothes and skin
Clutching on my breasts they scream
I am not who I used to be

Self-inflicted wounds I heal
Threw my heart out of this dream
Self-inflicted wounds don’t heal
My existence out of steam
 
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Great lyrics, man. However, I am not sure about the "thousand lights inside my phone" line. What is that referring to?
 
Yeah, same thoughts. I like the inner torment with the lyrics but I don't get the phone line. Is that something to do with callers? Very curious.
 
uh....well....that's deep....couldnt expect you guys to get it :p

lol

seriously now, it has to do with telephone and that through a telephone line we always get to hear good news and bad news, so I guess I'm referring to 'news' as 'lights'....lol...i should be a politician...
 
I like "my decisions left me bear (bare), and my people, they don't care" for some reason. It's simple but it hits me. I like it.

Jason
 
And now for something compeletely different...

I did some e-script proof reading with Versus and I believe that we are veryyyyyyy close to the final script version. This must happen in the next few days cause we must start doing some more practical things like location scouting, detailed storyboarding, rehearsals etc....

We probably won't have any swimming pools (Ted & Mark) but we will have lots of BTS fun! :)
 
UPDATE, BIG ****ING UPDATE

SCRIPT IS DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


We have a final script version!!!!

Finally!!!!!

THings to start doing ASAP:

- location scouting and notes on setups
- meet all cast members and give final version
- get all the props we need
- start testing camera shots
- start storyboards
- get down with Steve_Arm (lol) to talk about vfx/cc possibilities
- give script to Jimmy to start thinking about sound/music
- call the bike shop and give them hell for not having my bike ready (OT)
 
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