Jaime V
Well-known member
I watched this film last night.
I loved the beginning narrative, and the way you tied it to the illustrations. I thought the VO was done well too...it fit.
Story is where it is lacking for me though. I mean technically, everything is done fine, but it seemed as though I was watching the first couple minutes of a movie, and missed the rest...not watching a short.
Liked it visually though. Thanks,
I loved the beginning narrative, and the way you tied it to the illustrations. I thought the VO was done well too...it fit.
Story is where it is lacking for me though. I mean technically, everything is done fine, but it seemed as though I was watching the first couple minutes of a movie, and missed the rest...not watching a short.
Liked it visually though. Thanks,