First short (noir movie) - Un passo più lungo

Great! Omar, you did such a good work...i found "Un passo più lungo" a deep and solid work! Ora posso continuare in italiano...tanto vale che stia qui a scervellarmi con l'inglese. Ti rifaccio i complimenti, il tuo lavoro è molto buono...pecca soltanto in qualche scelta di shot, alcune inquadrature non mi convincono e tradiscono una certa inesperienza...cmq non sto a pontificare troppo visto che anche io mi appresto a dirigere il mio primo corto ed ottenere un risultato come il tuo sarebbe già qualcosa...
 
Omar that was excellent. If that was your first short. It was better than most people's final film project in film school. Keep it up.
 
Thank you very much! Do you think it is good just as first short or good (more or less) as short in general?
 
It was good in general but great considering it was your first short. I mean I seen a lot of student film making back in film school and a lot of them suck. Your film had a very nice style. The acting, the editing, the Dp work, the sound, music, all of them were outstanding. I know there were some meaning lost in translation, but don't worry it was still very good. It is only a short film and short films just showcase your talent and what you really can do, and you have done that successfully.

95 % of the critics probably couldn't make something better. :)
 
ufctrance said:
It is only a short film and short films just showcase your talent and what you really can do, and you have done that successfully.
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Thank you very much again! :beer:
 
I really liked the way it looked. I am a big noir fan. Did you do the black and white in camera or in post? If it was done in camera, what were your scene file settings?
 
trav_2483 said:
I really liked the way it looked. I am a big noir fan. Did you do the black and white in camera or in post? If it was done in camera, what were your scene file settings?
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black and white in post-production, through desaturation in FCP. Than I played with 3-way-colorcorrection. Anyway, my master pedestal (in camera) was high
 
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