Grain Belt Premium Beer Commercial Contest Entry

haha that was great, I don't know about that voice though. You can tell you were talking deep to begin with, and then lowered the pitch even more to make it sound deeper.
 
Dude I love it! I think you 're funny and could create a character based on the one from the commercial. Some comedy about nerds playing tennis, hey there you go, homework to do!

cheers!
George.
 
Daniel Skubal said:
haha that was great, I don't know about that voice though. You can tell you were talking deep to begin with, and then lowered the pitch even more to make it sound deeper.
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Yea I completely agree on the voice. I'd re-record it if I knew someone with more gusto! Anyone out there? :cheesy:
 
Loved it. Great colors and agree on the VO. I think it lags when the music stops and he goes to pick up the stereo and then we finally hear the VO. Maybe try to cut a second or two there?
 
Errr, I'm pretty sure you cannot actually show someone drinking in a beer commercial. Not sure if that will disqualify you from the contest, but I am about 98% sure that's like a law. I just did a beer ad this weekend, and was very careful not to have anyone actually drinking in the shots.

You might want to look that up and confirm, maybe re-cut it and re-submit if you think they will be sticklers for details like that.

Other than that, the shots looked nice, but I wasn't quite sure I understood what was happening, or why he was a local legend, or whatever. Like, was he playing someone else? I expected some kind of reveal like it turns out he was just hitting the ball against the wall or something. Not sure I get the concept.

But nice work on the shooting.
 
wartez said:
Yea I completely agree on the voice. I'd re-record it if I knew someone with more gusto! Anyone out there? :cheesy:
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What the heck, I might as well give it a try. My voice might sounds kind of naisely because I've got a headcold but I hope it works for ya!

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It's a 9mb file so if you could, just right click and save as...

 
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