my first try at this movie thing...feedback please!

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Diabolo

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this is my frist try at doing movies...this is a short teaser i put together...i still need to master this camera...and its a pain when you have so many factors in the production...sometimes i forget to do important stuff with the settings when you are basically doing everything...anywhoo...let me know what you guys think...comments are welcomed

http://staff.cccnj.edu/~ssantos/maleficio_trailer.mov

sambo
 
I liked your images and the way you had edited them.

I assume your movie is about voodoo. I couldnt take much else away after that. So maybe you could utilise the story a bit more, let us in on it so we can get a feeling of it.
 
well i could do that...but

well i could do that...but

because of the topic i would give the whole thing away...thats why i kept it like that...
 
I'd say this is more of a teaser than a trailer.

The look of it really feels more documentary than narrative. You should consider a new trailer that at least has an hint of the concept and/or story. Some narrative coverage slipped in between the shots you have now would punch it up and create some interest in seeing the full film.
 
thanks for the feedback!!

thanks for the feedback!!

i really appreciate the comments...i will take into consideration the tips and re-cut the idea.
 
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