Trailer For My New Online Sitcom

ZombieSquid

ZombieSquid

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Here's the trailer for my new online sequential episode short film comedy thing (i'm still trying to come up with a good description). The first episode should be up on my site within the next couple of weeks.

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Action Force Militia Trailer

Zombiesquid Productions

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Funny as always, guys.

Can you make it half as long at least? Each one of those dude's intros should be 6 - 10 seconds or so for a trailer if that long.

Only other suggestion ... might cut back to mixing the explosives once or twice before he takes a drink ... the gag didn't register for me at first ... I actually knew what you were going for right off (because I could second guess the good writing) but had to rewind two or three times to confirm it ... "okay are they making explosives ....yeah they are I think .... did he drink explosives or something else ... ah ok, all the glasses are the same which is not so smart ... got it ... funny"

I also like the girly music as counter point to the dude's running around in the woods in camo :thumbsup:
 
Thanks a lot Jack, you're awesome. The actual cut for the intro to the show should be around a third that length. PJC, why dirty them up?
 
Looks like it'll be really fun to watch. However, I felt its not really much use as a trailer coz...no one actually learns anything about what its about. It seems more like a teaser methinks. However it looks extremely funny. Especially the first bit where the guy's driving around on a tractor - that cracked me up for some reason...lol Definitely watching this when it comes out
 
The thing is, they wash their uniforms. They also get new ones whenever their old ones become too dirty so that they may maintain a professional and upright appearance.
 
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