30 seconds short film

Very nice... well shot. The colors were very rich and beautiful!

The pacing and editing worked well for me... you told the story well in 30 seconds! Good job-
 
Thanks for your comments.

I used sorenson squeeze to convert avi to mov.
I didn´t use any adapter, I shot around f: 2,8 - 4
 
Yes lovely looking footage.
Only things to keep in mind for future reference.
1. screen direction the guy was going this way and that. Yes he did change directions a few times on screen but the next shot he would be heading for the same "goal" but from the other side. Believe it or not for me it was obvious and jarring. Maybe because I had the sound turned off.
2. Is it me or did he look at his watch on one shot and then the next shot it was on the other hand?

Anyways, lovely scenery though.
 
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