"Merry Christmas...I Got You Herpes" a holiday special.

"We gave your cookie herpies, too."

"Can I have a bite of your herpes?"

asdkl;fjkdas;

Sorry, I was giggling too hard to type there.

Very funny and crass.

Loved the short.

Oh, and "Frodo" for a pet?

Just like my wife's parents.

The dog is Samwise Gamgee and the cat is Frodo. *sigh* Damn Peter Jackson.

sincerely,


ian
 
The dog bit was one of the required elements:

Character: J. Splain, window washer

Line of Dialogue: "That was when I was young and naive."

Prop: Photo, drawing, painting of a pet.

Do people find the film offensive?
 
To someone who has carried and dealt with herpes for a long time now, I find this short VERY offensive...







JUST KIDDING!!!!! I thought it was hilarious, and I NEVER respond well to comedy's. Excellent job.

peace
 
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action junkie said:
Whew. I didn't scroll all the way down at first and I thought you were serious about being offended.

That was the point.:Drogar-BigGrin(DBG) :Drogar-BigGrin(DBG)
 
I kinda thought it was a little long. Seven and a half minutes on one premise is a lot to ask of your audience. Also the acting shifted back and forth between real and surreal. The tone threw me off. You also had some axis problems with the eye lines during the big speech. But there were some awesome lines in it. "Mind if I have a bite of your herpes" Priceless. And the camera movements were really smooth!

Keep in mind all this comes from a guy who just shot a short about mario bros, so , you know, take it with a grain of salt.

Good stuff.

Oh and I didnt notice that it was done with the 48 hr film festival. WOW. That's great for 2 days.
 
have you thought about flipping the frame just for the guy's speech? I do that sometimes and it works. It's not perfect but sometimes it's better than having two people looking in the same direction.
 
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