what you think of this?

[xep5k]

was shot with DVX ... i know its hard to tell.... but do you like it?
this is kinda my first attempt at an intro clip.


http://host225.ipowerweb.com/~lsmfilms/Comp 1.mov

 

[joakim]

it's good but you should make it a bit longer.

 

[xep5k]

yea good point, i was thinking that too, your right.

 

[xep5k]

ok made it longer and made some sounds for it.

 

[joakim]

yeah that's much better! nice one!

 

[SilverWolf]

Wow that was nice. I think when the LSMfilms comes in originally it comes in a little too fast. I would make it come in a little slower if that makes sense.

 

[ryan brown]

Wow that was nice. I think when the LSMfilms comes in originally it comes in a little too fast. I would make it come in a little slower if that makes sense.

I sort of agree... but I think it just needs to hold a bit longer the second time, not the first. Maybe just one second longer or so, and I'd be able to remember the LSMfilms, rather than just get a glance of it and forgeting it.

 

[sheeley]

I agree with both... it could fade in slightly slower and could stay for longer... it'd be interesting to make it fade like the motion of the other random stuff, as well.

 

[twocik23]

Audio was a little distorted, I would probably lose the font and pick out a different one. Besides that looks good!

 

[xep5k]

k revised, thanks alot you guys for the good feeback =)

 

[tradur]

that is sick. nice work